longest posting contest

[Giftstar]

ok since alot of cats including me are not posting long enough we will be holding a 'longest posting' contest.

rules.
you may only post ONCE.
copying someone elses post and adding onto it is not allowed.
the posts are not all one thread so you dont say in your post you saw the cat who entered before you.
you may use any character but it must be a cat.
if possible write down how many words are in your post.
do not overdo how many words are in your post you will be disqualified, if it is a mistake  we can keep you in.

Twilightstar you helped me think this up please post here.

[Twilightstar]

So we just post random Rp things here? Or we copy a post we've made in another thread and just post it here as our entry?

How will just posting randomly make any sense?

In any case, here's my longest post so far:

Mistypaw grinned as her eyes opened, it was her first full day in the apprentice den and she planned to make TONS of new friends!
Mistypaw stood up in her nest and jumped out of it, taking a peak outside she saw it was still an hour or so from dawn, grinning she decided to make some fun for herself. Peeking into the nest next to her she checked that the cat sleeping inside of it was still asleep before jumping over the nest, realizing that she could jump the nest easily she grinned, she'd just invented a new game!

Jumping rapidly over the nest she soon got bored and checked that the cat in the next nest was asleep, checking all the cats in the den and finding that they were all asleep Mistypaw discovered that she was the first one awake this morning!
Her mouth breaking into a mischievous smile she promptly bounced over the next nest and then the next and so on until she'd made a full circuit of the den. She grinned and seeing that all the cats were STILL thankfully asleep she bounced over two at once, tumbling on her landing she grinned- A challenge!
She jumped over two more and landed softly, seeing this she gained confidence and tried to jump three- she failed. Miserably. She got over the first nest only to see, to her despair, that the second cat in her jump was waking up! The cat had raised it's head and Mistykit saw a flash of eyes as she catapulted into the waking cats face.

Cursing herself silently she rolled off the cats back,

"Err, are, are you okay?" 

She meowed praying that the cat she'd smashed into wasn't one of those real grumpy cats,
Padding a few paw steps away too give the startled cat some breathing space she stood up nervously- what if the cat was hurt? Would have to go get the med cat? She didn't know where the med cat den was! What if the cat was real grumpy at her?! I any case Mistypaw knew she'd have to wait to see the apprentices reaction... Then she'd have to apoligise a LOT before she could even THINK of asking the cat to play a game with her...

(Okay this was a VERY good post for me!)

[Giftstar]

you only get one post and in the end some one will win ok

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Don't blame it on me

Coldpath's warm, wet fur pressed against the Medicine Cat's den. Her beautiful amber eyes were shut, and she breathed very faintly. ShadowClan's leader, Talonstar, shoved his way into the den and looked at Coldpath with sorrow and helplessness in his eyes. He didn't know what to do. The scene flashed against his brain and into his eyes as he watched his deputy's almost still body. ThunderClan had once again stolen prey from ShadowClan. Poisonfang, one of ShadowClan's warriors, had accidentally killed one of their own warriors, Breezenut. So as payback, they snuck into ShadowClan camp and made Coldpath unconscious. Then they had dragged her back to their camp, made her their leader, Falconstar's, mate. But one of ShadowClan's kits, Opalkit, had watched ThunderClan carry Coldpath away. As soon as they were gone, she alerted the leader. Talonstar had never seen such a wise look in a kit's eyes. Talonstar gathered all his warriors, left the apprentices behind to guard the camp, then attacked ThunderClan. They left once they had got rid of one of Falconstar's lives. Now he was on his last life. But Coldpath wasn't in the camp. Talonstar split up his warriors to search. Eventually the youngest one, Goldheart, came up to him and showed him the body of Coldpath. It was bleeding, she was still alive, and she was trying to get up. She looked confused. It was that moment Talonstar realized something - he loved Coldpath. He picked up his deputy gently. Eventually they got back to camp, where he thought Coldpath was dead. She was dripping with blood and water, and he was panicking. The Medicine Cat, Poppyseed, eventually came out and took Coldpath to the Medicine Den. So here they were now. Talonstar sighed and left the den, crawling back to his. Only if he knew that Coldpath shared his feelings... although not his health. She woke up as soon as he left, and she yawned then winced. "Poppyseed!" she called, then almost yowled in pain as she moved. Poppyseed came running in. "Coldpath! You're awake! Here, let me put some 'soothing stuff' on your wounds." she said, crushing leaves and mixing then together. Then she smothered Coldpath in the strong-scented leaves. It made her feel dizzy. "Uh, Poppyseed? Is it supposed to make me feel dizzy?" the deputy asked, fighting to stay awake. "Yes." Poppyseed said, smiling almost evilly. "Wha-at?" Coldpath said, looking at the Medicine Cat. "I mixed deathberries into the paste. Talonstar will be my mate, Coldpath. Not yours. Never. Always mine. With you out of the way, I'll pick an apprentice and then retire to be a warrior. And then he'll be my mate." Poppyseed said, smiling evilly. Coldpath stared up in horror as she slipped away. Then she used the last of her energy to yell. "TALONSTAR!" Then her legs twitched and she fell into a deep death sleep. Talonstar, naturally, came running down. He silently peeked into the den, and the sight he saw was horrible. All the bright red deathberries were taken from the shelf. And he saw Poppyseed standing over dead Coldpath in delight. You can guess what happened next.

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Longest post I've ever made. Wow.

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Now to show u guys how I really rp. I am using one of my favorite cats. His name is Nightfeather.

Terror was gripping the entire band of cats around the lake. Starclan was falling, and the Dark Forest was rising. The Dark Forest had inflicted a deadly battle on the clans, and from the uprising of the Dark Forest, Starclan was separated. Blocked off from the clans. Hopeless. Yet, there was a prophesied cat, Nightfeather, who would save all the clans and bring peace. But only with help. He was the only prophesied cat from a different clan. The other three, or actually four, in Thunderclan, yet Nightfeather was Shadowclan.

Shadows engulfed the den, dark and forbidding. The strong smell of herbs was now replaced with the metallic tang of blood and death. The herb store was extremely low on herbs, and the ones used had been useless on cats who would die anyway. In the herb store, stood the large build of Nightfeather. The tom nosed through the herbs, trying to pick out some coltsfoot, to ease Badgerfang's breathing He was in the worst condition.

Nightfeather glanced up as another shadow replaced the eerie sunlight. In the den entrance was Blackstar, and plastered on his face was a mask of horror and uncertainty. Night feather could smell the fear wafting from his pelt. And the look in his eyes told the medicine cat everything. "Blackstar," Nightfeather motioned to the leader, leading him deeper into the cave. It was completely dark. "What is it, Blackstar?" Nightfeather meowed, concern in his deep meow. Blackstar opened his mouth to speak, but paused to think it over quickly. "I was out, hunting alone. But, I saw something..." Blackstar began to trail off.

Nightfeather placed his tail-tip quietly on Blackstar's back. Suddenly, he began to speak again.



"I saw four Dark Forest cats, all of them practicing battle moves, with a boulder shadowing them. On the boulder was Brokenstar. His eyes were blood-thirsty. The cats weren't training on themselves, they were using two clan cats, and teaming up two by two on the cats. They were Sunspeck and Grassheart."

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I'm not done, I will edit it, but my tablet is acting up. I have to wait to get to a computer. So don't count it,

[Twilightstar]

Nice One!